DAGNABIT!!!

Would somebody please tell me what you think about the poem below??? I’m really happy with it, but the point of putting it on my main page was so that somebody would comment…

Steffi???

Ian???

Anybody?????

…

I feel so alone… *sigh*….

Published in:  on February 3, 2009 at 9:58 pm Comments (2)

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  1. On February 4, 2009 at 9:19 pm noldorianstar Said:

    *sighs*
    Don’t feel alone
    I’m thinking and praying for you a lot.
    *nods head*

    Email me whenever you wish…I like talking with you. And thanks so much for all of your comments on my blog…they encourage me.
    ^_^

    -Steffi

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  2. On February 7, 2009 at 9:34 am Kenyn Said:

    Thanks. I was just being kind of silly… I was ready for someone’s opinion other than Matt’s, Katy’s and Greg’s. They’re great, but after a while, I get tired of (respectively) “I guess it’s good,… too much structure. Chaos is much more fun,” “*quietly* It’s very good Kenyn. I wish I had your knack for structure,” and “Hmmm…. You’re rhyme scheme is pretty good, and you followed all the rules… It’s got a nice theme to it.. And the repetition is done well. Very good.” That’s about how they always go when I think it’s worthy of being shown to anyone. I need more variety!!! *cough*

    So yes, I shall be sure to email you if I ever remember… that sounds terribly rude, but I’m afraid that’s how it is these days. I can’t ever remember to email anyone…. whoopse.

    ~Kenyn

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